Chris Marquette Message Board / Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (Donna) — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 04:38:51 +0000

aw thanks!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 04:29:58 +0000

That makes me very happy. The MB could always use more Donna.

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (justme) — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 04:08:41 +0000

Yeah, that was a great one!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (Donna) — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 04:04:46 +0000

Yahoo, another smut fan!!! We can always use another dirty mind! I think you will definitely fit right in with us Tish. Please tell me you have read Butterflies. It is so amazingly addictive, you couldn't dream better stuff than it. Although I really really wish I could! Perfect as always Deb. Thank you so much. Oh it has been too tong since I have been in here regularly, I don't have much opportunity right now, but if I have ever needed more of an incentive to get my butt in here, you just gave it to me. Thanks!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 15:48:31 +0000

I thought I did put a plural on fingertip. Damn. Fixed. Thanks!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (justme) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 14:58:47 +0000

I think I would change "fingertip" to "fingertips" and

"the sight the sounds" to either "the sight, the sounds" OR "the sights and sounds"

but otherwise I wouldn't mess with perfection.;)

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 13:38:11 +0000

You did go through a little spell there where you did want anything to do with smut. But you have been very game lately, it's true.

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (magicalturkey) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 13:28:19 +0000

I'm always in the mood to read it. Just rarely to write it

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 13:24:53 +0000

Sometimes, when you're in the mood.

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (magicalturkey) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 12:18:37 +0000

You already know my thoughts on this but you've had someone to fangirl smut with since last July, Deb

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (BiggestChrisMarquetteFan) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 05:58:58 +0000

Amazing job on the fic, Deb. It's awesome and very hot. And of course funny. ; )

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 04:12:24 +0000

Sweet! I had a feeling you were our type o' gal. I'll go look at the vampy pics now...

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (Tishery) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 04:07:32 +0000

Haha, I'm just fitting in perfectly here!

AT LAST!! I've found my place in the world! LoL. Oh, and I found those pictures i was talking about and posted them.

So...I have this urge to reread your smutty goodness...I think I'm going to...Shhh don't tell anyone!

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (TheCentralScrutinizer) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 04:04:30 +0000

HAHAHA! We are of like mind. To paraphrase you and Laura in the Twilight thread, it's nice to have someone to fangirl over smut with.

Re: Overtime - An Adam & Joan Smutfic (RATED R) - ADULTS ONLY!!!

dummy@example.com (Tishery) — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 04:00:37 +0000

Simple A/J smut are the best kind of smut! Why? Because it's allll about the good, yummy, drool worthy SMUT!