JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories

TeeJay · 29 Nov 07 :: 17:20

I think Laura was talking about me. Sorry, my comment on LJ wasn't meant to sound like I was "jumping on you". At all. I can stop leaving comments if you'd prefer that.

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 29 Nov 07 :: 17:45

What comment? I don't see anything.

magicalturkey · 29 Nov 07 :: 18:13

Actually, TeeJay, I was talking about Mark (mshaffer). He really did kinda jump down my throat, asking why Joan would want to be with a man like Adam who constantly cheats.

And I do like getting comments, they're fun. I just can't get ones that make my brain work at seven in the morning

TheCentralScrutinizer · 29 Nov 07 :: 18:31

So what did TeeJay say that made HER think she offended you?

And who cares about Mark anyway? :fedup:

magicalturkey · 29 Nov 07 :: 18:35

She left the review before Mark, so she might have not seen his to know he's the one that annoyed me.

Mark's my Uncle Chuckie...

TeeJay · 29 Nov 07 :: 18:40

He did recently praise your work on the joa.com message board, though. Yeah, I hadn't seen Mark's comment before. You're right, he came on a little strongly. I think I left a comment in the third chapter on Laura's LJ.

-TeeJay

magicalturkey · 29 Nov 07 :: 18:47

I just read the thing on the joa.com forum... it made me giggle.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 29 Nov 07 :: 20:54

OK, I read the comments and I reiterate, it's not cool to jump to conclusions so early on. Why can't we just let Laura write her damn story and see how it plays out?

magicalturkey · 29 Nov 07 :: 21:45

Thank you!

magicalturkey · 30 Nov 07 :: 00:49

Posted chapter five. ADAMNEEDSAHUG... and no one will give him one. Poor guy.

justme · 30 Nov 07 :: 01:37

Yep, it gets worse and worse for poor guy, doesn't it?

I'm enjoying it so much. And don't worry, Laura. I might jump to conclusions every now and then, but I can jump back just as quickly!

magicalturkey · 30 Nov 07 :: 01:41

You can jump to conclusions all you want, just as long as you don't basically tell me what will happen when a certain event takes place when no one but me knows that for sure

TheCentralScrutinizer · 30 Nov 07 :: 06:03

I'm really impressed with what you've done here so far, Laura. I'm not trying to speculate where it's going. Just enjoying the ride. Excellent stuff.

magicalturkey · 30 Nov 07 :: 14:32

Thanks.

I never planned for Kim to get dumped or cheated on, but some people might have seen the kiss as cheating. That's why I called Adam roadkill early on, he just gets his heart broken all around.

magicalturkey · 01 Dec 07 :: 04:45

Posted chapter six. Nothing is really working out right for poor Adam.

Up next, public embarrassment!

justme · 01 Dec 07 :: 04:51

Good chapter! Can't wait for the public embarrassment.

magicalturkey · 01 Dec 07 :: 04:59

Thanks

TheCentralScrutinizer · 01 Dec 07 :: 05:33

Ouch! Poor, poor Adam.

magicalturkey · 01 Dec 07 :: 05:40

I warned you. Road kill.

magicalturkey · 02 Dec 07 :: 00:15

Posted chapter 7, next chapter is the last... in case I come up with something to happen between now and when that one takes place.

The public embarrassment I put Adam and Joan through, I'm not sure is even possible anymore. I haven't been on a plane or even in an airport since long before 9/11 and obviously everything changed. But I did my homework, and apparently non-ticketed people can go to the gate but not enter it so...

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Dec 07 :: 00:31

NO! I promise you that non-ticketed people CANNOT go to the gate anymore. Non-ticketed people cannot even enter the TSA security lines. Trust me on this one. I've flown a great deal since 9/11 and I live in the city with the world's busiest airport. Any questions you have about flying or airports, ask me. I'll be happy to help you work out what is and is not possible.

magicalturkey · 02 Dec 07 :: 00:35

Alright. I had a flub-up then. I probably won't have to deal with airports again.

Adam broke the rules, he'll get arrested. Oh well.

magicalturkey · 02 Dec 07 :: 00:42

And I thought of how to play with it for the next chapter so Adam does get what's coming to him, sort of

My friend went to D.C. not too long ago, her boyfriend could get to behing the gate without a ticket. *shrug*

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Dec 07 :: 01:02

You can fix it easily by having her be at a ticketing kiosk or something, trying to check in with her credit card. They can have basically the same conversation and she can leave him at the first security checkpoint. Because there's no way in hell he would never make it to the gate. He would never even make it past the first security checkpoint without a ticket. He'd be tackled by a bunch of taser-totin' TSA cops. Especially in NYC. Also, I don't think Arcadia has it's own airport. She'd be flying into Baltimore.

Sorry to go all Chuckie on you, but this stuff is serious business these days.

magicalturkey · 02 Dec 07 :: 01:32

It's cool. Arcadia's a fictional city, it can have one if I want it to.

I just posted the last chapter and wrote in him going to jail and stuff. I left out his scary tattooed cell mate who stole a puppy

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