JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories

TeeJay · 30 Jul 07 :: 23:07

Angsty is good, I like angsty.

-TeeJay

domesticelefant · 31 Jul 07 :: 17:30

Me too.

magicalturkey · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:02

I just posted a new one... not the angsty one I'm working on for TeeJay, this one actually had me giggling all the way through it. I'm too lazy to post the link right now, just go over to my journal and it'll be there.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:09

Will do, right now.

Did I tell you TeeJay loved what you did on AHSO6 and we're calling it finished now, thanks to your contribution? I really appreciate what you did on that. You got it unstuck and you will get credit, of course. It'll be posted after TWWA and OOAL (which is finished except for a final polish), so it won't be long.

magicalturkey · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:11

Cool! Thanks

TheCentralScrutinizer · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:19

No, thank YOU. Just got done over on LJ. Posted a request.

magicalturkey · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:22

Oh, that was you... I got the email and was sitting there like "who would want this... they must hate Adam." But now I know it's you and... wow. Not something I'd expect from you.

magicalturkey · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:27

And yet... I get ideas floating around in my brain for that. To get the Bonnie thing in it'll go to multi-chapters.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 01 Aug 07 :: 05:38

I know. I had this though about a year ago (when I still couldn't even deal with it) and TeeJay and I talked about it. I kind of always wanted to try it. Just like I wanted to figure out how they got in that position in the camper anyway if she wasn't expecting him to try to get with her. It's just always bugged me, how the whole thing happened from the camper to Bonnie. As aired, it just doesn't track for me. They did not set him up to do what he does. I guess I want it to be deeper and more realistic, but still in character.

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 03:22

Just so you know, I deleted my request post but I remember what you guys wanted me to write so I'll probably get those out. People were just being annoying and saying basically "I don't care what you write about, just as long as it's about (insert pairing)" when I asked for ideas because I couldn't think of any. :fedup:

But thanks for the requests you guys made, they actually helped me out of my rut.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Aug 07 :: 03:27

Cool beans. It's been really fun hanging out, talking fics and writing with you. I'm gonna send you a new edit of TWWA shortly tonight. TeeJay didn't finish what she wanted to do with the ending and I'm in the middle of giving it a polish right now. I'll explain what she's going for and you can take a crack at it if you'd like. Another challenge! Heh.

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 03:30

I don't know if I can get to exactly what she was aiming for, but I'll try

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Aug 07 :: 04:22

I'm sending you an email...

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 04:30

ok, I got it

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Aug 07 :: 04:41

Great, let me know what you think.

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 05:02

It's great. I sent you an email back explaining what I did.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Aug 07 :: 05:28

It's wonderful and I had to take it even further.

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 05:46

Hah! I love it!

TheCentralScrutinizer · 02 Aug 07 :: 05:51

Anything else you wanna do to it?

TeeJay · 02 Aug 07 :: 14:19

I added a few more lines of dialogue and sent it to Deb. She's gonna send it to you, Laura. I think it's almost finished, and I love it! But there's that thing with the pulling out of chairs that I think needs a little more fiddling. You'll see what I mean when Deb sends you the latest doc. Look for my comments in purple.

-TeeJay

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 23:06

I posted a new story earlier today with Carl and Adam in it... someday I'll get to you guy's requests.

TeeJay · 02 Aug 07 :: 23:26

I read it earlier today. Aw. It was cute but also sad. ADAMNEEDSAHUG! Or maybe CARLNEEDSAHUG! ?

-TeeJay

magicalturkey · 02 Aug 07 :: 23:50

How's this... THEYBOTHNEEDAHUG!

Last edited by magicalturkey (02 Aug 07 :: 23:51)

TheCentralScrutinizer · 03 Aug 07 :: 01:16

I'll check it out shortly. Right now, my eyes are bothering me and I've got a headache. I need to rest them for a few minutes, then I'll be back on the computer, going over TWWA one more time before I send it back to you, Laura. Be thinking about how you can tweak that scene with the pulling out of the chair so that it's obvious what's happening there. TeeJay thinks it's awkward. I'll get it over to you as soon as I can.

magicalturkey · 03 Aug 07 :: 01:22

Alright, take your time, Deb

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