Joan of Arcadia - Butterflies

magicalturkey · 04 Dec 07 :: 17:36

Ok, I haven't read it yet... give me a couple hours

TheCentralScrutinizer · 04 Dec 07 :: 18:22

OK. Email me at work when you're done please.

magicalturkey · 04 Dec 07 :: 18:25

I read through it and I didn't do anything to it... if you want me to email an identical file to you

TheCentralScrutinizer · 04 Dec 07 :: 19:17

No, that's cool. Thanks.

domesticelefant · 06 Dec 07 :: 21:39

I received both files, but I have been to tired to read lately. I'll read the new stuff during the weekend, I promise. I can't wait to read about the wedding!

domesticelefant · 17 Dec 07 :: 19:26

Oh, I forgot to tell you, I have finished reading. Not ready to talk abou it yet, though.

TeeJay · 30 Dec 07 :: 13:34

I uploaded a new chapter to the graphically enhanced version today. Chapter 6 is now up.

Here's the banner I made for Chapter 6:

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 30 Dec 07 :: 19:54

LOL! That's awesome! I love it.

domesticelefant · 30 Dec 07 :: 21:21

I like it.

BiggestChrisMarquetteFan · 30 Dec 07 :: 23:02

That banner is awesome!! Amber and Chris are my fave actors!

justme · 30 Dec 07 :: 23:29

That's beautiful, TeeJay! I loved the one where he's painting her, too.

TeeJay · 30 Dec 07 :: 23:30

Thanks. We still gotta decide with which chapter to put the painting pic.

-TeeJay

justme · 30 Dec 07 :: 23:34

The deleted scene from "Reclamation", right? (Maybe not deleted, but the part after Adam drove Jamal home.) Or possibly the chapter after "Break the Night With Color", I've forgotten the title for the moment. :embarrassed:

EDIT: "Color the Night With Love", I think. Is that right?

Last edited by justme (30 Dec 07 :: 23:53)

domesticelefant · 31 Dec 07 :: 00:36

TeeJay wrote:

Thanks. We still gotta decide with which chapter to put the painting pic.
-TeeJay

Well, does he paint her in one of the chapters? (And no, I don't mean any procedures in deleted scenes! )

TeeJay · 31 Dec 07 :: 00:55

justme wrote:

EDIT: "Color the Night With Love", I think. Is that right?

Yep, that's the one. Deb, the paining thing is your baby. The painting pic can go with whatever chapter you think fits best.

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 31 Dec 07 :: 00:57

We already have a banner for Break The Night, so yeah, it could go with Color The Night. Kind of. Or even Out On A Limb since he works on a painting of her.

TeeJay · 25 Jan 08 :: 23:50

I just stumbled across something that I'd like to show you. I guess it's kinda like what a storyboard is for a movie. Because when we were planning and writing the chapter Reclamation, we talked about what the new back garden and the mural would look like. This is what we came up with:

The back garden:

Though, somehow, as I look at this, the door of the shed isn't placed right, is it? Wasn't there a window to the right of the door? The shed might have changed around as the show progressed too. But I'm thinking of episode 2x20 where Joan brings Adam her "stuff" back. When she leaves, there is a window next to the door.

A rough sketch of what the mural could be like:

-TeeJay

domesticelefant · 25 Jan 08 :: 23:55

Looks great although I had to check what's a mural in German and I don't really get what a garden box is. Is that what we call "Beet" in German?

TeeJay · 25 Jan 08 :: 23:59

Yeah, I'd say a garden box is like a abgetrenntes Beet. I'd imagine kinda like this:

And a mural is what Jamal airbrushed onto the side of Adam's shed. Not sure what the German word is. Wandgemälde?

Velkoplosny%20obraz%20-%20MURAL%20GLOBAL.JPG

-TeeJay

domesticelefant · 26 Jan 08 :: 00:18

I checked mural on LEO and it said Wandgemälde. Didn't I post this? And thanks for explaining the garden box, I was pretty sure it's a beet, but you can never know.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 26 Jan 08 :: 02:14

LOL! Cool stuff.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 20 Feb 08 :: 04:32

Drumroll, please...

Here it is, the long-awaited honeymoon chapter of Butterlies --- PG Version...

Chapter 28
Sunny Honeymoon
by Sisterdebmac & Carol
Deb's Author's Note:
Thanks heavens for Carol. She has been such a blessing. She almost single-handedly saved the wedding chapter and her contributions to this chapter have also been amazing. You rock!
Carol's Author's Note:
Thanks to both Deb and TeeJay for allowing me to take another visit inside "Butterflies". It is more fun than I can ever say. I'm so in love with these characters that I'm forever grateful to these two wonderful writers for continuing to pour new life into them. I've never written in such a collaborative atmosphere before. You're the best!
Synopsis:
Adam and Joan go to Hotel Cabo San Lucas for their honeymoon.
Rating:
PG
Genre:
Total Fluff. After everything they've been through these two deserve an angst-free honeymoon, no?
Disclaimer:
They're not mine... blah blah blah. Barbara Hall... blah blah blah. CBS... blah blah blah.
--..__..--==--..__..--==--..__..--
Adam and Joan took a limo to the Hotel Wexler in downtown Baltimore. They stayed the night and took the same limo to the airport the next day. Then they flew to Cabo San Lucas. It was beautiful there. They saw lots of sights, took a boat trip, shopped, ate and had lots of fun.
The End

(for the real story, see Butterflies: The Unadulterated Version)

magicalturkey · 20 Feb 08 :: 04:37

Hahaha :rofl::rofl::applause:

TheCentralScrutinizer · 20 Feb 08 :: 04:46

Thank you.

Should we be totally evil and dedicate it to "Uncle Chuckie"? :devil:

justme · 20 Feb 08 :: 04:46

Isn't that a fascinating yet touching account? Don't you feel like you were actually there?:D

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