#1 03 Sep 09 :: 15:02

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The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

UPDATE: OLD STORY HAS BEEN REMOVED. I NEED TO MAKE A REWRITE OF THIS FANFIC AND MAKE IT BETTER CLEANING IT UP SOME. HOPE YOU ALL CAN UNDERSTAND. smile

Okay so I am working really hard on that fanfic for you guys, Deb and Kate. big_smile So far it's coming along pretty good. I've titled it "Alternate Universe" and it's a fanfic based on a mix of me in my real life and "The Girl Next Door" film with Eli and his pals.

I'll keep you all posted on my progress as I write it.

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#2 03 Sep 09 :: 16:05

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

That's pretty ambitious.  Happy writing!


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#3 03 Sep 09 :: 16:22

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Hehe thank youuuuuzzzz! big_smile

PS: I watched Remember The Daze last night... isnt it just so F-ing cute what Chris/Felix does with his hands during that whole movie????
LMAO Its hilarious! I cant stop thinking of how he moves his hands when he talks... HAHAHA!!!
Especially at the scene when he is outside at the party by the pool telling his crazy story. LOL

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~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#4 03 Sep 09 :: 16:30

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Yeah, he was hilariously all over the place.  But by far my favorite stuff is between him and Seany.  Especially when Mod says he sold the whole bag of weed and Felix touches him gently and says, "You're so special to me."  BUWAHAHAHAHAA!!!  I die everytime.  And also, the way he falls on his ass all of a sudden.  Priceless.


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#5 03 Sep 09 :: 16:36

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

LMAO yeah his brother's all "dude dont touch me!!!" hahaha and Felix like waves his arms a bit and backs off focusing on driving as his brother FREAKS out in the van... LMFAO!!!

Gets me every time... they have such an amazing connection and screen personality together... they should def do more movies with each other... its great to watch them interact and get all into their roles when exchanging dialogue and working together.

"Okay I have a question for you. Okay? Focus for a second!..... How badly do you wanna f**k me? Don't think... just answer.... okay?.... yeah?.... *flicks his hands around*... no...."

HAHAHAH!!! BEST SCENE EVER besides when he's telling his lil story and whips out his "lucky knife" hahahaha

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~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#6 03 Sep 09 :: 17:21

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

It's also funny when he grabs her and wraps himself around her at the party.


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#7 03 Sep 09 :: 17:45

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

ITS JUST SO DAMN ADORABLE!!! I squeal at that part... lollllzzz
Wish I had a cute perverted stalker chasing me around like that and hugging on me and grabbing me to dance.... SHE'S SO LUCKY!!!

UPDATE: Now I do. My cute BF hahahaha tongue he says "MINE MINE MINE" when he hugs me saying no one can have me but him. XD

Order of fave dorky pervert roles Chris has played:

1. Eli Brooks (DUH! LMAO)
2. Felix (for obvious reasons just discussed)
3. Mike "I slapped the ham to it like an hour ago" HAHAH!!!

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~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#8 03 Sep 09 :: 17:48

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

The only thing about Felix is he looks like he smells really bad!  :puke:

I think Keith from Alpha Dog is my fave dorky perve.  The "tube stake boogie" thing and him pinning that girl to the wall while he has no shirt on and his pants are about to fall off???  :drool:  :drool:  :drool:


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#9 03 Sep 09 :: 17:53

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

LMAO cuz that girl always screws up her face when he gets close to her and turns away from him. Im betting he just smells heavy of mary-j all the time. I LOVE HIS HAIRSTYLE! The side buzzed floppy mohawk is HOTTTTTT ... fits his face shape so well!

Another fave role of his that I love is the dorky geeky kid he played in the horror movie: Freddy Vs. Jason.
The scene where he is crying and holding the gun is JUST. SO. INTENSE. On both an emotional and visual level.

Ohhh pants nearly falling off? O.O! HEHEHE niiiiice I so have to get that movie next! I'm dying to see that scene as you guys discuss it so much... NEKKID!! LMFAO.
I'M GONNA GET ME SOME NEKKID!!!! XD!! lol

~Mrs.Brooks~ :embarrassed: is having wicked thoughts....

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~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#10 03 Sep 09 :: 18:27

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Here's a taste...

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That's his underwear you see in the naked torso pic.  His pants are barely clinging to his butt.


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#11 03 Sep 09 :: 18:46

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

O....M...F...G..... :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: ... SORRY FOR ALL THE DROOL... I'll brb... *goes and gets a mop*

LMFAO XD!!!

~Mrs.Brooks~


~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#12 03 Sep 09 :: 18:52

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

I knooooooooooowwww!!!!!  (channels Craig Ferguson)

I just wallowed in all the nekkid torso Keith caps TeeJay made when the DVD came out.  Didn't come up for air for days.  I just love that scene.  As a chest festishist I must say, his was HAWT!


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#13 03 Sep 09 :: 18:55

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Id have to say I ABSOLUTELY agree. To not agree is pure insanity and I should be shot for it.... LMFAO lol

~Mrs.Brooks - although she IS insane... she agrees 100%... cuz she dont wanna get shot in the a** by Deb~ tongue


~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
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#14 03 Sep 09 :: 19:13

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Once you see the movie you'll WANT to agree.  big_smile


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#15 04 Sep 09 :: 02:19

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Oh I know I will... for sure. wink Im thinking about ordering it right now from Amazon. Should I get full screen or wide screen? (i can never tell the difference between those two formats LMFAO)

~Mrs.Brooks~


~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#16 04 Sep 09 :: 02:35

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

I said earlier that if you don't get widescreen you're gonna miss some Chris.   He's on the side in the picture a lot and he's cut out in some places in the fullscreen version.  How can you not tell the difference?  The widescreen version has the black bars at the top and bottom so they can widen the frame.   YOu get much more picture that way.  Someone posted a great illustration of the difference in a couple of Chris scenes.  Let me see if I can find that...


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#17 04 Sep 09 :: 02:36

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Here, check out this post, it's a perfect illustration from The Education Of Charlie Banks...

http://www.chris-marquette.com/forum/vi … 751#p48751


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#18 04 Sep 09 :: 02:45

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Thanks. Will do right now. What I meant from not telling the difference actually is that I get those two confused. I dont know which one has the black bars... I HATE THE BLACK BARS. I like to see the WHOLE picture on screen lol

~Mrs.Brooks~


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#19 04 Sep 09 :: 02:49

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Oh, OK.  I understand not liking the bars and a smaller picture, but I can't stand missing things like my favorite actor on the sides of the frame.  Did you look at the example in the link I posted?  If you watch Charlie Banks fullscreen, Chris is cut out of some scenes there too.


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#20 04 Sep 09 :: 03:24

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

I'm really looking forward to reading your fanfic, Bree. I'm sure it's going to be awesome!  big_smile


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#21 04 Sep 09 :: 08:54

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

I would always choose widescreen over full screen. I'd hate to know that there's something cut off from what I'm watching. The Miracles DVDs are actually full screen, but I think it was shot in widescreen since I've seen widescreen screencaps somewhere. Why are they not putting it on the DVD in widescreen, then??? In a decade or so, everyone will have a widescreen TV, so I think the 4:3 format will eventually vanish.

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#22 04 Sep 09 :: 12:21

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

awww ty Melody.... yeah Im so excited too and cant wait to make it as awesome as possible. To finally complete it for all of you to enjoy reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it.
I will definitely keep to it and post the link to it as soon as its completed.
Ill try hard not to let you down lol tongue
Sometimes writing short stories can turn into NOVELS and sometimes I get flustered half way through and never finish. I hate my brain sometimes. LOL

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~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#23 04 Sep 09 :: 12:41

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Hahaha if it is going to be 200 pages you should so post chapters at a time! Keep us at bay while waiting anyway. If the story is anywhere near as good as your sketches im sure to be completely captivated. Cant wait....


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#24 04 Sep 09 :: 18:31

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

:embarrassed: hehehe awwww you are too sweet Kate.

Ok I can post up chapter at a time if you'd love to enjoy the suspense of the story that way... but... uhhh... where in the heck should I post it?

*ponders this*
(just so everyone knows... the story is a mix between fantasy within Eli's world... and reality within MY world... meaning my character is literally ME and all things in that story about "Bree" are real things about me... lol neat huh?)
That's why I chose to call it "Alternate Universe" because it's my existence crossing in with his.... I'm only on chapter 2 so far and beginning chapter 3 now... big_smile

UPDATE: This concept has changed but I will keep the original as a back up and store it safely away. My fanfic is being REDONE and I am aiming for the idea that Deb and I discussed.

Last edited by TheFutureMrsEliBrooks (31 Mar 15 :: 01:52)


~*Minions! Let's move! *snaps fingers*~ Eli Brooks TGND
~*We live in a crazy mixed up world. CRAZY. But oh so beautiful.*~ - Eli Brooks TGND

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#25 04 Sep 09 :: 18:34

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Re: The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

Just post it in this thread.  I thought that's what you created it for.  If you notice, we've posted many fics right here on the Fanfic board.  Go take a look at one and see how we format them...


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