Joan of Arcadia - Butterflies

TheCentralScrutinizer · 22 Sep 07 :: 05:00

It's incredible. What do you mean pre-apology?

magicalturkey · 22 Sep 07 :: 05:01

Thanks. Earlier I said I'd write you an apology smut story for Fabio!Adam giving you nightmares tonight... so I just wrote it now.

Last edited by magicalturkey (22 Sep 07 :: 05:01)

TheCentralScrutinizer · 22 Sep 07 :: 05:08

Ahhhhhhh. I see. Cool. Hee. You are pre-forgiven then.

magicalturkey · 22 Sep 07 :: 05:12

Yay! :dancing:

magicalturkey · 22 Sep 07 :: 18:24

Sisterdebmac wrote:

Hey Laura, I have a challenge for you. Write a Butterflies missing scene. Anything you want.

Ok, I re-read Butterflies and I thought about it... and I don't think I can do it. I mean, there are no missing scenes in Butterflies. It's perfect as it is.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 22 Sep 07 :: 18:45

Gee, OK. Well, if you ever think of something you wanted to see in there, go for it.

magicalturkey · 23 Sep 07 :: 01:04

I might have done it anyway unintentionally. TeeJay mentioned that my newer story looked like a future missing scene.

TeeJay · 23 Sep 07 :: 01:15

Well, I can certainly see it being a future missing scene for EA. Can you, Deb?

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 23 Sep 07 :: 01:40

The rug burn thing? Yeah, because Laura and I were talking about the quickie. That's the first thing I thought of when I read it. Think we could morph it into the EA quickie, Laura?

magicalturkey · 23 Sep 07 :: 01:40

Well, maybe that too... but what TeeJay was talking about was a Adam/Grace story I posted earlier today.

TeeJay · 23 Sep 07 :: 10:19

Can we just please not have Adam's hair slicked back in Butterflies? I hate that. We did establish that his hair is a little longer for the wedding than Linus-length, but please not gel-slicking back. Ugh.

-TeeJay

magicalturkey · 23 Sep 07 :: 15:22

Heh. Ok. I don't know if me or Deb have the most recent document, but I'll edit it out of mine.

domesticelefant · 23 Sep 07 :: 15:58

TeeJay wrote:

Can we just please not have Adam's hair slicked back in Butterflies? I hate that.

I'll stop reading the story if that'll happen! (And I am the biggest fan of it, so that's a threat! :devil: )

magicalturkey · 23 Sep 07 :: 16:02

Ok, ok. Me and Deb just basically copy/pasted my last couple stories into Butterflies, it's just the simple deletion of a couple words.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 23 Sep 07 :: 18:56

I'll fix it.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 24 Sep 07 :: 21:45

Laura, sometime in the next hour or so, I'll be sending you a new EA doc from my work addy. I blended in the pertinent stuff from our chats in the order they're supposed to happen. When I get home tonight, I'm going to try to turn all that stuff into a proper outline. It's much easier write and sequence the scenes if the notes are in the proper order, I think.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Sep 07 :: 03:42

Another EA coming your way, Laura. Integrated the notes more, fleshed some stuff out.

magicalturkey · 25 Sep 07 :: 04:00

Ok, I read it and we still need to fix it so Adam's hair isn't gelly anymore. I keep meaning to, but that keeps being the only thing I change and I don't wanna send it back with nothing really done to it.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Sep 07 :: 04:15

Oh, sorry, meant to fix that. Got all sidetracked. Listen, you take a pass at it when you can, edit it all you want. I think I'll lay off it for a day or so, unless I really get inspired or something. Sometimes, just reading it through beginning to end with the freedom to edit as you please is very inspiring. You can totally do that, you know. Nothing's set in stone. If there's anything you wanna play with, go for it.

magicalturkey · 25 Sep 07 :: 04:21

Alright, cool. I don't really care about the hair thing, it was my idea in the first place... I just wanted to fix it before either of us forgot and we had to face the Wrath of Anne.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Sep 07 :: 04:25

Well, whatever you do to it, your version is the next edit so you can fix it. If you need to chat or anything, just let me know. Any questions come up...

magicalturkey · 25 Sep 07 :: 05:10

I'm gonna crash now. I did some work on Adam's bachelor party, but I wanna go a little further with it tomorrow. Maybe I'll do something with Joan's party to but awkward!Adam is more fun to write than drunk!Joan.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Sep 07 :: 05:38

Cool.

domesticelefant · 25 Sep 07 :: 19:28

Joan is going to be drunk? Woooow. Never expected THAT!

magicalturkey · 25 Sep 07 :: 19:49

She's just gonna be a LITTLE drunk

Don't worry, more happens to her than just getting drunk.

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