Joan of Arcadia - Butterflies

TheCentralScrutinizer · 05 Oct 07 :: 18:58

Got it. Will look at it over lunch.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 08 Oct 07 :: 04:12

New one on the way, Laura. TeeJay added some stuff.

magicalturkey · 08 Oct 07 :: 13:52

I emailed you back to your work address, Deb. It's not an edit, just a quick question.

TeeJay · 08 Oct 07 :: 16:19

I actually added some more comments and a snippet of dialogue to the phone call scene, which I also sent to Deb this morning. I hope she can reconcile the two versions.

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 08 Oct 07 :: 17:35

TeeJay, I just sent Laura a compilation of our emails today so she can see what we've been talking about and give us feedback on it.

TeeJay · 08 Oct 07 :: 17:37

Okay, sounds good.

-TeeJay

domesticelefant · 08 Oct 07 :: 18:32

Uh, I think I deleted the latest Word file with the whole thing by mistake. Can you send an up-to-date version again, please?

herrommance · 09 Oct 07 :: 18:38

Im glad iI was fianlly able to read this. I am not finished yet, but I have gotten pretty far. Wow wow wow! It is amazing you guys!

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 18:58

Thank you! What's the last thing you read, just out of curiosity? And did you read the prequels that were posted separately?

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domesticelefant · 09 Oct 07 :: 19:17

I'm almost finished with TBT. Liked it so far. I mean, I wouldn't say that I *love* what you did with Bonnie (no spoilers) but I like the flow of the story. Can I say it like that in English?

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 19:25

Yeah, that one's sooooooo far in the future, I don't wanna give anything away to anyone. But thanks.

domesticelefant · 09 Oct 07 :: 19:27

Yeah, that's why I didn't post spoilers. I'm going to finish tonight.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 19:53

It's all over but the smut, huh?

domesticelefant · 09 Oct 07 :: 20:07

I could say something now, but I think I sould post this in the Adult thread. LOL If at all.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 20:12

About what? About the icky smut scene with you know who?

domesticelefant · 09 Oct 07 :: 20:15

Uhm ... let me finish and then I'll decide. LOL

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 20:40

OK. And if you wanna discuss it, we can talk in the Doghouse. We tried really hard to make the smut at the end the complete opposite of the "icky" scene.

domesticelefant · 09 Oct 07 :: 21:33

Just finished, but not ready to talk about it yet.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 09 Oct 07 :: 21:54

OK.

herrommance · 10 Oct 07 :: 14:32

idk which chapter I will have to go see. Nope havent read the prequels, but you know that'll be my next stop

TheCentralScrutinizer · 10 Oct 07 :: 15:35

You don't even remember what's happening in the story where you are? Have they tried and failed to elope yet? Just trying to get a feel for it.

magicalturkey · 10 Oct 07 :: 16:07

If she hasn't gotten to that part yet she's gonna be like ":o SPOILS!"

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 10 Oct 07 :: 16:23

Well, yeah, you're right. Damn, how am I supposed to find out where she is in the story without a landmark? I just couldn't think of a better one. Can you?

magicalturkey · 10 Oct 07 :: 17:30

I'd say how many times have they had sex so far... but it's easy to lose count. Um... did Adam's father die yet?

TheCentralScrutinizer · 10 Oct 07 :: 18:18

LOL! Yeah, that probably wouldn't work.

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