JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories

TheCentralScrutinizer · 24 Oct 07 :: 22:47

When it comes to smut, they can go on vacation as often as they please.

TeeJay · 24 Oct 07 :: 22:54

As long as it's wildly romantic with no interruptions, right?

-TeeJay

TheCentralScrutinizer · 24 Oct 07 :: 22:58

Works for me!

magicalturkey · 24 Oct 07 :: 23:02

TeeJay wrote:

As long as it's wildly romantic with no interruptions, right?
-TeeJay

What if there are interruptions? :devil:

TeeJay · 24 Oct 07 :: 23:21

Like, in a car, half-naked, making out and a police officer knocking on the window? (Okay, there goes my idea of wildly romantic. LOL)

-TeeJay

magicalturkey · 24 Oct 07 :: 23:29

Who says that wouldn't be romantic?

TheCentralScrutinizer · 24 Oct 07 :: 23:41

You got the car part right anyway...

magicalturkey · 24 Oct 07 :: 23:43

Is that what you're writing, Deb?

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 01:52

Something like that, yes.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 02:27

If that's what I'm gonna post on my LJ, I'd be more than happy to :grovel:

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 03:47

I'm actually working on it now. It's turning into a Butterflies post-wedding chapter and while there's not really a "story", it's got a set-up and a reason behind it. You could still post it on LJ if you like it. It'll probably end up in Butterflies on down the road too.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 03:49

Alright, it can stick to Butterflies

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 04:24

I'm basically done with it except for a line of two and a polish. It's only two pages long. It doesn't have a plot, just a bit of background. Maybe someday it could be part of a Butterflies chapter, but it can't stand alone. It's a longish smut vignette, nothing more.

One thing to keep in mind when you read it is that it's almost verbatim my friend Steph's fantasy. I embellished a tiny bit here and tehre but mostly, I just put it in past tense and changed the POV from first person to omnipresent. If I missed a "me" that should be a "her", that's why.

There's like almost zero dialog.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 04:28

Zero dialog is fun :drool::drool::drool:

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 04:52

There's a tiny bit. Just not much. And I'm emailing it to you right now...

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 05:02

Got it. Read it. :o :drool::drool::drool:

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 05:23

LOL! So you wanna post it?

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 05:26

Nah. You should save it for Butterflies

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 05:33

I'm not trying to twist your arm. You certainly don't have to.

But keeping it for Butterflies will mean no one will read it for a VERY long time. And isn't LJ the kind of a place where people post works in progress and just whatever they're doing? If this thing gets posted in Butterflies, it'll probably be as a scene in a chapter. Who knows when we'll find a place to put it?

I guess I could just email it to anyone who wants to read it if they see us talking about it.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 05:36

Next smutty story I post, I'll post it with it.

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 15:26

Don't do anything yet. I found a couple of typos and TeeJay found a couple more. I'll send you a new version.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 15:32

Not a problem. My next smutty story isn't in the near future, but I might post yours on it's own

Anyway, new Joan/Adam story up. Joan has a fever and Adam comes over to take care of her

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 15:40

Cool. Well, then I'll send you the edited version in a few minutes then. TeeJay liked it, she described it as "kinda risque". And that's kinda an understatement

TheCentralScrutinizer · 25 Oct 07 :: 17:00

I forgot about this stupid webinar I have to attend right now. Will send it afterward.

magicalturkey · 25 Oct 07 :: 21:25

let me play the teacher-like biologist here. Not quite a neverending cycle if they both caught the same bug. Once your body fights an infection, you build antibodies against that certain bug. And you usually can't get infected with the same bug again because the antibodies would come and attack and neutralize it straight away. At least that's how it works with "harmless" infections such as a cold or throat infection or stomach virus. Lesson over. Homework for your next story is to read up on the reproductive cycle of nematodes. :-P
-TeeJay

I just can't do anything right this week, can I? :doh:

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