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#751 29 Oct 07 :: 02:51
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
New Adam/Joan smut story up... just for a warning, the prompt is kinky so....
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#752 29 Oct 07 :: 05:16
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
It is H.O.T.
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#753 29 Oct 07 :: 17:29
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Even though it's missing the actual sex? 
Thanks
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#754 29 Oct 07 :: 18:14
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
It's not missing. Besides, sometimes the foreplay is the hottest part.
Deb,
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#755 29 Oct 07 :: 18:30
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
It's always the hottest part in my stories...
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#756 29 Oct 07 :: 19:28
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Nothing wrong with that. 
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#757 29 Oct 07 :: 21:34
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
TeeJay, I really screwed up with the spelling didn't I? :doh:
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#758 29 Oct 07 :: 21:37
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
No comment. 
But I loved the story.
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#759 29 Oct 07 :: 21:42
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
I was too distracted by Adam and Joan's hotness to care about spelling
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#760 29 Oct 07 :: 21:53
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
That's a fair reason and you're excused. I can't help it. Typos jump out at me. Maybe that's because I'm not a native speaker.
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#761 29 Oct 07 :: 21:59
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
That's probably it. Deb found one typo yesterday, when I wrote he instead of she. I didn't fix all of the typos you found though, because I like some of them
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#762 29 Oct 07 :: 22:09
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
I ddidn't notice anything other than what I reported. I was too caught up in the smut too.
Deb,
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#763 29 Oct 07 :: 22:17
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
She wrote bad instead of bag, for one. There were a few word repetitions that sounded weird. And naval instead of navel. 
(Sorry, Laura, didn't mean to put you on the spot. My spelling's not perfect either.)
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#764 29 Oct 07 :: 22:20
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
The bag knew Joan was gonna be a bad girl
I mostly kept the annoying repetitions, because a couple sound dirty out of context.
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#765 30 Oct 07 :: 01:18
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Depends on your definition of "bad".
Deb,
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#766 30 Oct 07 :: 01:56
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
bad=naughty. I doubt Adam (or his bag) would think Joan was bad.
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#767 30 Oct 07 :: 05:30
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Posted a new Adam/Grace one... there's really no easy way to discribe it so... yeah.
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#768 30 Oct 07 :: 06:00
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
HAHAHA! Awesome new one. Love it.
Adam's bag can think? I thought the fact that it couldn't was his only real flaw.
Deb,
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#769 30 Oct 07 :: 06:09
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Thanks.
His bag was smart enough to carry a condom
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#770 30 Oct 07 :: 06:34
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
True dat.
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#771 31 Oct 07 :: 23:47
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
Posted a new Adam/Joan smut fic, special for Halloween. It's short because I gave myself literally 30 minutes to write it. So... it probably sucks (no pun intended)
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#772 31 Oct 07 :: 23:55
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
My Goodness!
Okay, point of order: I don't believe for a single second that Joan hates the teasing. I think she finds it excrutiating, but that's not the same thing, is it?I could point out a couple of little typos but, since I'm still grinning, I'm not going to.
Exceedingly well done!
Carol
Deb, that was for the Three Story High Club.
I made a little boo-boo posting my last story, boo-boo fixed so you all can see the story now.
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#773 01 Nov 07 :: 00:12
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
You're right, Carol and I actually thought about that after it was posted and was too lazy to ask Laura to fix it. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. It was killing me that you were absent and I thought this one might be something you'd like.
Deb,
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#774 01 Nov 07 :: 00:43
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
I liked it veeery much! (And it's excruciating, so I'll keep my typo trap shut for at least a week. I was a good speller before they invented spell check.)
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#775 01 Nov 07 :: 00:48
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Re: JoA: Adam & Adam/Joan stories
LOVE the new one, Laura. Happy Halloween!
That was the one good thing about being without internet access was knowing I'd have a stockpile of Laura stories when I could finally get back on!
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