The Girl Next Door fanfic "Alternate Universe" by Bree :]

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 18:42

Aye aye captain! *salutes* on my way to check it out right now... wicked cool

*hops skips jumps*

~Mrs.Brooks - runs down the hall and trips on a mini trash can... just for kicks!~

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 18:53

RESERVED FOR FUTURE REWRITE OF THIS FANFIC. STAY TUNED!!!
I will get right on this and post my new story up as soon as possible.

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 04 Sep 09 :: 18:57

Cool. Gonna print it out and take it with me to read at lunch. :-)

justme · 04 Sep 09 :: 19:42

Can't wait to read that one, Bree! I love Eli, he's so funny. It's high time someone wrote some Eli fic!

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 19:59

OMG I KNOW! He is def my fave character of ALL TIME. God I love him.... *sighs* hehe
I'll do my best to please. I've got lots of ideas in this head of mine for this story... only trouble is... getting it all down in wordpad fast enough before I forget or get distracted.
My brain works faster than my hands when typing sometimes.

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justme · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:06

I remember once that someone (Laura, was it you?) wrote one where Eli was Adam Rove's twin brother and was
off in boarding school. And when he came home was was always getting into trouble. It was really cute. I wish I could remember the title.

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TeeJay · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:09

I once wrote a JoA/GND crossover of sorts, you might be referring to that one. I don't think I ever uploaded it anywhere. Let me try to dig it up.

-TeeJay

TeeJay · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:13

Okay, here we go. It's more of a script snippet than a fanfic.

INT. ROVE RESIDENCE - EARLY EVENING.

JOAN turns up at ADAM's house, they go to Adam's room. ELI, Adam's twin brother, comes out of his room as Adam and Joan are just about to enter Adam's.

ELI: Hey, bro, what's up?
ADAM: Eli, hi.
ELI: So, who's the hot chick? (points at Joan)
ADAM: (stammering slightly) Oh, uh, this ... this is Jane.
ELI: Jane, huh? (smiles at Joan) I'm Eli.
JOAN: Well, it's Joan actually. Nice to meet you.
Joan holds out her hand. They shake hands.
ELI: (frowns) Which is it now, Joan or Jane?
JOAN: It's Joan. Your brother calls me Jane. Why, I don't know. You'd have to ask him.
ELI: (shrugs) Nah, not going there. He's a weirdo. It's what he does.
At that moment, there's TV noises coming out of Eli's room, loud moaning and something that sounds like whiplashes and fragments of words like "Oh! Yeah, baby!"
ADAM: (to Joan, blushing slightly) So... okay. Uhm, come on in.
Adam opens the door to his room and lets Joan enter first. Once she's inside, Eli takes Adam by the upper arm, holding him back for a moment.
ELI: So, you gonna bang her?
ADAM: (sighs) Eli...
ELI: (holds up his hands akin to a defensive gesture) Okay, okay. I'm just sayin'...
ADAM: Do me a favor and turn that down. And don't snoop around, okay?
ELI: Okay, sure, you got it.
Adam goes into his room. Joan gives him a sheepish smile.
JOAN: That's not ... (points in the direction of Eli's room) what I think it is, is it?
ADAM: Oh. Uhm... Well, he's got this thing for ... uh...
JOAN: Porn?
ADAM: Look, I know it's kinda embarrassing, but, yeah. I mean, he's a nice guy and all...
JOAN: Hey, don't worry about it. It's cool. He and Friedman would become fast friends, don't you think?

INT. ROVE'S SHED - SATURDAY AFTERNOON.

This is not the shed's interior the way we know it. It's still the same shed, there's just a lot of video equipment around, two TV sets, a computer and several tripods and two video cameras in the front part of the room. The back is still the workbench with lots of artsy stuff around. Eli is fumbling around with one of the video cameras, sitting on a stool in front of his TV. Adam comes in, walking to the back of the room to where his workbench is at which he usually does his art.

As Adam approaches his workbench, we see that there are video tapes littered on it. Adam picks a tape up, holding it in Eli's face.

ADAM: Eli, how often do I have to tell you not to put this smut with my art.
ELI: Chill, dude. It's just porn, okay?
ADAM: It's embarrassing. Not to mention inappropriate. What if Jane comes here and sees all this?
ELI: (knowingly) Oooooh, Jane. Now I see. You really like this girl, huh?
ADAM: (impatiently) Yeah, I like this girl. Could we give it a rest already?
ELI: (winks at Adam) So, have you... you know? (makes a fist with one hand and slaps the palm of his other hand against the thumb and index finger area a few times)
ADAM: I don't see how that's any of your business.
ELI: Aw, come on. I mean, it's the logical thing to do, right?
ADAM: For you, maybe.
ELI: Hey, come on, you don't wanna tell me that you haven't thought about it. I mean, she's hot. She's totally into you, so what are you waiting for?
He gives Adam a good natured slap on the shoulder. Adam looks annoyed for a moment, then he narrows his eyes, looking at Eli inquisitively.
ADAM: How do you know she's into me?
ELI: Hey, man, it's totally obvious. Don't tell me you didn't notice the way she looks at you. Seriously, you're some piece of work. She's, like, so into you.
ADAM: (repeats to himself) She's into me. (looks at Eli) So, what do I do?
ELI: You have to ask? Take her to a motel room and bang her like a beast!

-TeeJay

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:27

AHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *jumps up and down* I LOVE IT!!! TEEJAY!!! YOURE A GENIUS!!!!

~Mrs.Brooks - Is dying of laughter and crying over this fabulous fan-script~

justme · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:34

Yeah, that was it! So funny.

TeeJay · 04 Sep 09 :: 20:35

Thanks, Bree. I haven't read yours yet, will do so when I find a minute. I also just quickly made a script-style PDF from my snippets, it's much easier to read: http://www.chris-marquette.com/stuff/EliAndAdam.pdf

-TeeJay

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 21:00

ELI ROVE!!! HEHEHE CUUUUUTEEEEE!!!

~Mrs.Brooks~

TheCentralScrutinizer · 04 Sep 09 :: 21:10

Read the first chapter. Excellent. You're a very good writer. I've printed out the second chapter to start reading at the traffic lights on the way home.

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 04 Sep 09 :: 21:25

lol awesome! and thank you! I love to write... its one of my many passions. *winks*

Im working on chapter 3 right now. its actually turning out really interesting.
Im sure Eli wont come into play until chapter 5 or 6 at least but Ill take my sweet time cuz i dont wanna rush my creativity even though I am DYING to bring him into the story.

Its better to make it last and build antici........................ pation. HAHA!

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Warbee · 05 Sep 09 :: 03:59

AWESOME Bree, its really good. Your cat Oliver reminds me of my dog Muffin, she likes to wake me up by jumping on my chest and sniffing my face hahaha. I really like the idea of adding yourself into the character universe. I am not very creative and never thought about doing a fanfac, but this idea has me intrigued!

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 05 Sep 09 :: 04:23

hehe glad you like it.
the me in this story is based on how I was in high school.
Though I am still goth... lol... I am a lot less moody and feeling not so alienated anymore.
After high school I really came out of my shell and stopped letting people push me around.
Now I have great friends (all of you included) and I am much happier.

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 05 Sep 09 :: 07:13

Didn't get to read anymore tonight. But I've got a long weekend ahead. In fact, I hope to do some writing myself. We've been doing this series of sequels to an A/U JoA S2 fic in which Adam and Joan slowly begin to explore a sexual relationship by Femmenerd, To Give Is To Receive. We wanted it to culminate in a rewriting of the camper scene in Independence Day. I'm finally up to that chapter... :drool:

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 05 Sep 09 :: 08:44

OMFG THAT IS MY MOST FAVE EPISODE EVER! LET ME READ IT ASAP AS SOON AS ITS DONE. *grins*

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 05 Sep 09 :: 09:00

Some of it, the lead-up stuff, is already on FFN. The preliminary things. Wanna read that...?

Femmenerd's To Give Is To Receive... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2471493

The first sequel, by Carol and I, Experiments... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3970493

Laura's sequel to that one, Everywhere... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3983959

Carol and I wrote a sequel to Laura's piece, Dreaming Is Free... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5336443/1/Dreaming_Is_Free

They're all short and smutty.

Next up, Time Alone At Last (the ID camper scene rewrite). Stay tuned...

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 05 Sep 09 :: 09:33

WICKED! TY!!!!
Ill dive right in to that cuz I need me some Chris-fic to make me grin uncontrollably.
YOU ROCK! All of you are so awesome here, my lil Chris fans family hehehe

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 05 Sep 09 :: 09:40

Yep, we're here for you.

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 05 Sep 09 :: 09:43

WEEEEEEEEEEE!!! hehehe thank goodness for all of you. Without you I'd be lost.

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TheCentralScrutinizer · 05 Sep 09 :: 09:52

Me too.

TheFutureMrsEliBrooks · 05 Sep 09 :: 10:13

OMG IM UNCHALLENGED NOW!!! SWEEEEEET.
But I still miss being a cute lil horndog.... XD!!!
climbing up the evolutionary rank ladder in the MB

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Warbee · 05 Sep 09 :: 10:22

Hahaah and its been less than a week....holy crap!

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